blog commenting

 what i know about blog comments: blog comments are beginning with a greeting. 

the next thing they have is a positive thing. 

then a thoughtful comment

then the one after that is a helping thing that could help them improve on the work

then its ending with a nice thing like keep up the work or something like that

my first comment is on Taimane's blog

hi Taimane

i like the way you put a lot of detail in the post 

did you think about putting what is LPS day

i noticed that you put four words below the comment could you explain what those words

My terrific first day of school

We have learnt about pirates. Because it was pirate day it was our first day of school it was fun because mr matai dressed up in a pirate suit and it was funny

Good because we were learning about different shapes of our group. I got six & we were learning about pirates. It was fun.

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