Wednesday, August 7, 2019
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
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Hi Lennox,
ReplyDeleteYou have made a great start to your persuasive writing by hooking the readers straight in with what you would like. I like the drawings you have put in to show what new playground equipment you would like. You need to continue providing more examples and information in your reasons and close your writing with an ending.
Keep going Lennox!