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Thursday, May 21, 2020

what i learnt in the past three days

hi readers,

this post is about what i learnt from the past three days, the first thing i learnt is about a diamante poem, a diamante poem is a poem that is shaped as a diamond and has seven lines, example:

                       Sun
                Fiery, Yellow
    Burning, Blinding, Exploding
 Flame, Light, Night, Crescent
    Shining, Orbiting, Reflecting
               Cold, Silver
                     Moon 

i also learnt that lions can live for 10 - 14 years

and thats all i learnt thank you for reading hope you enjoyed
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2 comments:

  1. AnonymousMay 25, 2020 at 8:27 PM

    Hi Lennox, this is a stunning Diamante Poem. I enjoyed reading this and the amazing adjectives and verbs. Did you have a title for this?
    Mr Matai

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    1. AnonymousAugust 26, 2020 at 9:41 AM

      Thank you Mr Matai for the positive comment. No i didn't have a title for this Diamante poem. Do you have any suggestions for the poem?

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