descriptive writing

 in room four we are learning about descriptive writing here's my one it's called black panther its not quiet finished but yeah here it is

Black panther 
One day there was a little kid named T'Challa. T'Challa's dad was the king of Wakanda. T’Challa wanted to become the king of Wakanda. His dad was a superhero, his name was Black Panther. T’challa’s dad was the first ever black superhero. One day Black Panther went to the museum because there was a bad guy named Golden Cheetah. He was Black Panther's worst victim because he killed his mum. Then one day T’Challa’s dad got killed because the Golden Cheetah was fast and killed Black panther. So T’challa found his dad's suit for black panther and king of Wakanda.  He found a girlfriend and had a wedding in 2018 he started dating her in 2016. In 2019 they met a new friend named Peter Parker and  he became spider-man. They heard a scream coming from the maze bank while walking from KFC.. They made a clan called DC. One day Black Panther was in the maze bank and there was a bad guy named Doctor Devil. Doctor Devil was there because he was meeting Golden Cheetah to plan when they are going to explode the whole world. So one day they decided to explode it the day they were in the maze bank but on that day iron man heard what they said and he was crying because he was going to break down the nuclear bomb by blocking the big massive hole with a defensive flooring

i think this writing is good but it might not be an desciptive writing but atleast i gave it a go