An Story Web

Hello readers this is my Story Web, this included characters, setting, problem, outcome and the actions. My story was about a boy named tim got teleport-ed to a planet named Moogill and an alien named Meep  thought the cat rusty was a beast. I thought the story boring but the activity easy.

Do you like how I have set out my story web? Is it easy to follow?

Problems in Atlantis

This week, Miss Lee asked us to write a fantastic narrative writing about a pobble365 picture. We also needed to add in all the descriptive tolls we have learnt. Like alliteration is 3 words with the same letters in the front and nouns are naming words.

My narrative is about aquaman who saves his planet.

How do you rate my writing 1-10?