Hello readers this is my Story Web, this included characters, setting, problem, outcome and the actions. My story was about a boy named tim got teleport-ed to a planet named Moogill and an alien named Meep thought the cat rusty was a beast. I thought the story boring but the activity easy.
Do you like how I have set out my story web? Is it easy to follow?
Hi Lennox Its Ngarangi
ReplyDeleteI like how your reading is descriptive in your outcome and action.
I thought that moogill was a pet dog but he wasnt.
Could you add like Moogill is a dog or like he is human describing what they are like a person named melody and people who didnt read that book might not know if its a animal or human.
Love from Ngarangi
thx
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