This week, Miss Lee asked us to write a fantastic narrative writing about a pobble365 picture. We also needed to add in all the descriptive tolls we have learnt. Like alliteration is 3 words with the same letters in the front and nouns are naming words.
My narrative is about aquaman who saves his planet.
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